Love your journal, sweetie...hope to see you update it soon!
I love your play! You are very talented. I didn't know your mom was internetprincess until now. I had visited her a few days ago. God bless and I wish only good things for you!!!
. Hope your day goes well. Take Care & God Bless.
.. It is so cool.. I had to post it when I read it..
Finally here it is. My first play I have written. Your comments on my play are appreciated and welcomed.
Hidden Angels
Characters:
Josh - Nice Gentlemen on plane in Greece
Trinity - Lady in China
Kelly - An Aussie From Australia
Rachel - Girl from Canada
Amy - Lives in Britain
Jonathan - Guy in Chile
Kathryn - Irish girl
Brandon - Russian man
Guy - Tries to trick Lizzie into buying invalid concert tickets
Lizzie - Main character, girl reading an essay to class
Miss Kris - Teacher
Class - Group of about 9 students
Scene 1
(In class with about 10 students and a teacher, one student needs to be Lizzie, Miss Kris is at the front.)
(Sound of bell ringing)
Miss Kris - Take your seats, that was the bell. I hope ya’ll have your essays to read for everyone.
Student 1 - Essay? What essay? I didn’t know we had an essay.
Miss Kris - The one I assigned last Monday. You’ve had a week to get it done.
Student 1 - Well I forgot
Student 2 - As usual
Student 1 - you shut up or I’ll
Miss Kris - Both of you be quiet. Now, who wants to go first.
Lizzie - I do (waves hand in air )
Miss Kris - Ok!
Scene II
(Lizzie walks to the front and begins to read her essay)
Lizzie - All my life I‘ve wanted to meet an angel. I never can find one. I even traveled the globe. First I went to Greece…
Student 3 - Wait a minute. You’ve never been to another country.
Lizzie - Miss Kris said to use our imagination for something we want to do.
Student 3 - I thought it had to be real.
Miss Kris - I said it could be either.
Student 3 - Oh ok
Miss Kris - Please continue Lizzie.
Lizzie - When I was taking off from Greece. I was seated next to this really cute guy named Josh. After we introduced ourselves I realized my bag was missing. I forgot it on a bench. Josh rescued my bag and I was grateful.
(Fades to other side of stage where the encounters will be acted)
Lizzie - Hi I am Lizzie (shakes hands with Josh)
Josh - Mine is Josh
(to herself) Lizzie - Oh no! Where is it?
Josh - What’s wrong
Lizzie - I forgot one of my bags on a bench
Josh - Hold on just a sec, (He runs off and retrieves her bag for her)
Josh - Here you go
Lizzie - Thanks (Hugs Josh tightly)
(Fades back)
Scene III
Lizzie - After Greece I headed to China. I was so amazed by the amount of stores and merchandise, I nearly walked in front of a car. Luckily I was stopped by someone.
(Fades) (Walks to edge of road starts to walk out as Lady grabs her arm. Car goes by)
Lady - Stop don’t you see, the street is crowded
Lizzie - (looking frightened) - Oh thanks
Lady - Your welcome, I’m Trinity
Lizzie - I’m Lizzie
(Fades back)
Scene IV
Lizzie - I then ventured to Australia. I was staying in Sydney. All the hotels were full. There was this nice Aussie who let me stay with her. Her name was Kelly.
(Fades)
(Kelly walks up to Lizzie)
Kelly - Hey, you look kinda down
Lizzie - I can’t find a hotel anywhere
Kelly - Well come on you can stay with me
Lizzie - I don’t want to be a burden
Kelly - No it’s fine come on
(Fades Back)
Scene V
Lizzie - Next I went to Canada. I was going to a concert there. I ran into a guy selling invalid tickets for $100.00 more than the price. I almost fell for it but was saved by a street smart girl, Rachel
(Fades)
Guy - Wanna buy a ticket from me. You won’t have to wait in line. Just a hundred dollars more.
Lizzie - Well, this is along line and it’s going to start soon
(Starts getting money from wallet while the guy waits)
Rachel -Don’t do that the guys a fake. Come with me there is a shorter line over here.
Guy - Hey girl, why you going to blow me like that
Lizzie - thank you, how’d you know
Rachel - Been going to concerts for years, you eventually catch on
(Fades back)
Scene VI
Lizzie - I went to Britain next. I was overwhelmed with the scenery. I was on a drop of a cliff taking snap shots of a town outside of London. I was two steps from falling when this girl Amy stopped me.
(Fades)
(Lizzie taking snapshots)
Amy - Excuse me miss
Lizzie - (stops walking) Uh, yes
Amy - Any closer and you will fall
Lizzie - (steps back) I didn’t even notice how close I had walked to the edge. I’m Lizzie
Amy- I’m Amy. Like Camera’s?
Lizzie - Well not really , but I like this scenery
(Fades back)
Scene VII
Lizzie - I went further down to South America to Chile. I was looking into buying a painting that I had seen before. A man informed me that the artist was not the original Artist, he was an imitation artist. I would have blown $30,000.
(Fades back)
Jonathan - Hi I’m Jonathan, and I just wanted to inform you that this painting you are about to buy is a fake.
Lizzie - What?
Jonathan - Licornda de Chaco is an imitation artist. This work is fake and about $10.000 over priced.
Lizzie - Really! I didn’t know that I needed that money to continue my tours anyways.
(Fades back)
Scene VIII
Lizzie - Even though Ireland is a beautiful country the hotels are poorly kept. So I was going to camp on a hill, but then an Irish girl helped me.
(Fades)
(Lizzie was setting up a small camp)
Kathryn - What are you doing?
Lizzie - I’m sleeping here
Kathryn - Why?
Lizzie - Because this ground is probably more sanitary than that hotel in town
Kathryn - Yes it is, but if you go over the hill to the next town. You will find a very nice hotel.
(Lizzie gets up and looks over the hill)
(Fades back)
Lizzie - the very last place I visited was a small village in Russia. I would have been lost the whole time if a guy hadn’t helped me out
(Fades)
Brandon - You look lost?
Lizzie - Well with all these back roads and twisted streets. Of course I‘m lost
Brandon - Well then, follow me and I will give you a tour of our back road village (Holds arm out to Lizzie, she links with his arm and they walk off)
(Fades Back)
Lizzie - I never realized until now how each person helped me. And how they represent my friends. For my friends are Angels. My hidden Angels.
Miss Kris- thank you Lizzie that was brilliant
(class claps)
(lights fade, show ends)
Aloha sweetie, WOW that was a great play. I thought to myself thats going to take some time to read but was wother the time to read it. Thank you for that and can't wait to read more. Hope you had a grand time at the doll show. Have a great trip Puppy